Defense of Presentations
Ten tips to give a great thesis defense
Recently, a fellow graduate student defended his master’s thesis. He set the
record for the shortest time to degree in our College with a nice job lined up
afterwards. But that also meant he never presented his work at a conference, or
a department/college seminar. This was his first- and most important “big
talk”. What follows are the top 10 tips I gave him at one point or another as
he was preparing that should be a help to anyone getting ready for a “big
talk”.
Planning Your Talk
1) Know Your Audience
Everyone will tell you to know your audience, which couldn’t be truer when
you’re planning the introduction to your talk. Sure, there is a big difference
between talking to high school students and presenting at a conference, but try
to think: who is coming to my talk? If they are all cellular biologists like
you, then skip the central dogma slide. But if you have a mix of disciplines
you need to be able to explain your work to a biologist, as well as an
electrical engineer. Imagine you’re giving the talk to one person with each
potential background. Would each person be able to follow it? Sometimes you
need to sacrifice some specific details in order to explain the important stuff
to everybody. (But you should be able to talk extemporaneously on the specifics
if anyone asks!)
2) Justify Yourself
An introduction is more than just a history of your field up until now.
That is, it’s more than a literature review. You need to review the current
literature, but more importantly put your research into context. What have you
done (or what are you doing) that no one else has done? Keep in mind that just
because no one else has done X doesn’t mean doing X is worthwhile- there might
be a very good reason why no one else has done it! As you introduce your
research you’ll likely explain why you’re doing it, but make sure you also explain
why others in the field care. Even more important that justifying your work is
justifying your conclusions. You MUST be able to back up any claims with solid
references, or solid experimental results! In many cases this means statistical
tests of quantitative data. When in doubt, err on the side of “inconclusive” or
qualify/temper any of your statements rather than stretch your conclusions.
3) Tell A Story
One of the most jarring moments in a bad presentation is the lack of
transitions. Your presentation should flow from slide to slide and section to
section. This will most likely mean that you aren’t going to present your
experiments in the order that you did them. You’re NOT telling the story of you
working in the lab! Think: what are the overall conclusions from your work and
how can you explain and prove the things you’ve concluded? Walk your audience
through the story, laying out the evidence convincing them you’re right about
your conclusions. One last thing: you’ve (hopefully) done a lot of experiments,
you’ve invested a lot of time, energy, and maybe even money into these
experiments and you want to show off everything you’ve done. But if an
experiment or data slide doesn’t fit in the “story” you might have to leave it
out. If you can’t make it fit in the flow of your story and/or you don’t NEED
it: leave it out.
4) Sweat the Small Stuff
The little details are important. Even if you have some really great
results to show, you’re going to anger, upset, or at least annoy your audience
if you don’t pay attention to details. Some examples:
·
Label the axes of any graphs (with units), don’t use 10E3 mV (when V works)
and don’t forget error bars!
·
Make sure any images have scale bars, and label items of interest. (You
might know what’s a cell and what’s dust, but everyone else might not!) Use the
same size, color, and font text.Try to use the same slide layout.
·
Make all your graphs, diagrams, molecular depictions, etc. with the same
program throughout. It’s noticeable if you copied one molecule from a paper,
made some in ChemDraw, and others with ChemSketch. The same holds true with
graphs in Excel versus Origin.
·
Excel can be your friend but if you use the default graph settings it will
be your downfall. Don’t leave on the gridlines or use the standard random
colors. Oh, and look into Origin.
5) Present in Bite Sized Slides
For each slide be sure to explain everything. Explain the x and y axes of
your graph, explain what a large value indicates, and a low value indicates.
Walk people through how you set up the experiment, how you collected the data,
analyzed the results, and talk about the controls. Before moving to the next
slide, restate the major finding or “take-away” from this slide. What did this
experiment tell you, and what questions are still unanswered. This will help
build in transitions as you tell your story. You probably know every piece of
your presentation inside and out, but you need to remind your audience of
salient points from earlier in the presentation.
Giving the Presentation
6) Practice, Practice, Practice!
Even the most beautiful slides with the most logical flow and greatest data
can trip you up if you don’t know what you’re going to say. It should go
without saying that you can’t just read off of your slides, but seriously:
practice, practice, practice! Run through it in your head, do in out loud and
most importantly, do it in front of other people: schedule practice talks! In
the days leading up to your presentation you should be able to run through the
talk in your head without notes. As you’re walking the halls, driving, or
cooking you should run through the talk over and over. The goal is that when
you get up there on the big day, everything comes out naturally- almost second
nature. For me, I need to write a script- I don’t memorize it word for word,
but the act of writing what I want to say helps. Of course, if you’re a naturally
gifted speaker and can give a talk on the fly you’re set- but you should still
practice!
7) Don’t wait until the last minute
The goal of practice talks is to get feedback from friends, lab mates,
classmates in general, and hopefully your advisor. It does you little to no
good if your practice talks are the day or two right before your talk. You need
to give yourself time to integrate their changes into your presentation- both the
slides and the talk. I like a formal practice talk the week, and two weeks
before the talk. This gives you enough time to change slides, change what you
might say, and change the written document (if applicable). If you give
yourself enough time you might even be able to squeeze in an extra experiment
before the big day to fill any “holes” in your story.
8) Try out the room and equipment
Not all practice talks are created equal. Sure, you can run through the
slides on your laptop in your advisor’s office but you really need to get up in
front a group of people- preferably in the same room you’ll be giving your
presentation. Not only do you get in the presentation mind set, but you get
used to the space, you test the equipment and therefore minimize surprises on
presentation day. For example, one talk I went to recently was marred by the
screen flashing horizontal bars randomly- it was nearly seizure inducing.
Finally, they borrowed someone else laptop but do you really want that stress
on your big day? Dress rehearsals are your friend!
9) Be comfortable with your knowledge
In many cases when you present your research you will be the most
knowledgeable person in the room about your topic. Be comfortable with that,
and confident that you know what you’re talking about. Professors and
especially your thesis committee (whom probably know a decent amount about your
topic) can smell fear like sharks find blood in the water. Don’t make it easier
for them! Don’t let them know you’re nervous, or might not be sure about
something. Confidence goes a long way, BUT don’t let it go too far. Don’t get
cocky because nothing is more tantalizing that crushing an OVER confident
student. Be confident, but not cocky.
10) Be humble
You know your research, your techniques, your experiments, and your data.
But you might get questions a little removed (or a lot removed) from your
research. You might even get questions you don’t know the answer to, or aren’t
sure about. The best advice I can give someone going into a defense- even last
minute- is don’t be afraid to say “I don’t know.” Guessing, or even worse,
making something up, is so much worse that admitting you don’t know the answer
to a question. I’ve seen professors who will grill a student and not stop until
they say “I don’t know” or they catch them answering wrong (guessing/making
something up). You’ll never know everything about everything so don’t be afraid
to say “I don’t know”. But it is inexcusable to guess or make up an answer- it
will only get more painful from that point on. On the flip side, don’t answer
every question with “I don’t know”- it’s not a get out of jail free card!
How to Make Thesis Defense
Slides
Few graduate students are as quite prepared for
their thesis defense as they would like to be. The rite of passage, just before
they head into the world of academics, is a forethought presented with little
preparation. Understanding the procedures, however, will enable the candidate
to recite his presentation with confidence. Many students choose to utilize
PowerPoint and other presentation software to encapsulate their findings.
Digital presentations help navigate the board through a point-by-point, logical
process that demonstrates effective time-management and maturity.
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1
Comb through
the information in your dissertation's introduction to use as a framework for
the defense slides.
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2
Type in the title
of the dissertation in bold, centered font. Type in your name, the name of your
university's department and the date in smaller font on the same title slide.
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3
Title the
next slide "Acknowledgment" and list the names of your faculty
advisor and those who contributed to the success of your work.
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4
Insert a
brief statement on the following slide. Substantiate the statement with several
slides that reflect data, statistics and relevant pictures about the problem.
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5
Address the
significance of the research in one slide, followed by a page of community and
nationwide applications of your findings.
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6
List all
research questions as they appear within your dissertation.
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7
Provide a
literature review of relevant texts and previous experiments conducted by other
researchers.
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8
Create a
slide that provides an overview of the methods used to research each question.
Address the rationale for each specific method in addition to its reliability.
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9
Insert
tables, graphs, and charts that demonstrate the results of your experiments.
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10
Highlight
critical findings that validate or disprove your hypothesis. Account for error
using statistical methods.
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11
List your
findings and their relevance to your field of study.
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12
Describe any limitations
that emerged during the research process.
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13
Recommend
pathways and alternatives for future studies. Identify a logical continuation
of your work for yourself and others.
Presentations
and reports are ways of communicating ideas and information to a group. But
unlike a report, a presentation carries the speaker's personality better and
allows immediate interaction between all the participants.
A
report is the orderly presentation of the results of the research which seeks
truth and interprets facts into constructive ideas and suggestions (Gwinn,
2007). A report is normally built on research that finds, develops, or
substantiates knowledge. Once all the facts are collected, they are then
organized and presented in a report designed to meet a need for specific
information.
A
presentation is created in the same manner as a report; however, it adds one
additional element — The Human
Element.
A
good presentation contains at least four elements:
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Content — It contains information that people
need. But unlike reports, which are read at the reader's own pace,
presentations must account for how much information the audience can absorb in
one sitting.
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Structure — It has a logical beginning, middle, and end.
It must be sequenced and paced so that the audience can understand it. Whereas
reports have appendices and footnotes to guide the reader, the speaker must be
careful not to loose the audience when wandering from the main point of the
presentation.
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Packaging — It must be well prepared. A report can
be reread and portions skipped over, but with a presentation, the audience is
at the mercy of a presenter.
o
Human Element — A good presentation will be remembered
much more than a good report because it has a person attached to it. However,
you must still analyze the audience's needs to determine if they would be
better met if a report was sent instead.
The
voice is probably the most valuable tool of the presenter. It carries most of
the content that the audience takes away. One of the oddities of speech is that
we can easily tell others what is wrong with their voice, e.g. too fast, too
high, too soft, etc., but we have trouble listening to and changing our own
voices.
There
are five main terms used for defining vocal qualities (Grant-Williams, 2002):
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Volume:
How loud the sound is. The goal is to be heard without shouting. Good speakers
lower their voice to draw the audience in, and raise it to make a point.
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Tone:
The characteristics of a sound. An airplane has a different sound than leaves
being rustled by the wind. A voice that carries fear can frighten the audience,
while a voice that carries laughter can get the audience to smile.
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Pitch:
How high or low a note is. Pee Wee Herman has a high voice, Barbara Walters has
a moderate voice, while James Earl Jones has a low voice.
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Pace:
This is how long a sound lasts. Talking too fast causes the words and syllables
to be short, while talking slowly lengthens them. Varying the pace helps to
maintain the audience's interest.
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Color:
Both projection and tone variance can be practiced by taking the line “This new
policy is going to be exciting” and saying it first with surprise, then with
irony, then with grief, and finally with anger. The key is to over-act.
Remember Shakespeare's words “All the world's a stage” — presentations
are the opening night on Broadway!
There
are two good methods for improving your voice:
1.
Listen to it! Practice listening to your voice while at home, driving, walking,
etc. Then when you are at work or with company, monitor your voice to see if
you are using it how you want to.
2.
To really listen to your voice, cup your right hand around your right ear and
gently pull the ear forward. Next, cup your left hand around your mouth and
direct the sound straight into your ear. This helps you to really hear your
voice as others hear it... and it might be completely different from the voice
you thought it was! Now practice moderating your voice.
Your body communicates different impressions to the audience. People not
only listen to you, they also watch you. Slouching tells them you are
indifferent or you do not care... even though you might care a great deal! On
the other hand, displaying good posture tells your audience that you know what
you are doing and you care deeply about it. Also, a good posture helps you to
speak more clearly and effective.
Throughout
you presentation, display (Smith, Bace, 2002).:
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Eye contact: This helps to regulate the flow of communication. It signals interest
in others and increases the speaker's credibility. Speakers who make eye
contact open the flow of communication and convey interest, concern, warmth,
and credibility.
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Facial Expressions: Smiling is a powerful cue that transmits happiness, friendliness,
warmth, and liking. So, if you smile frequently you will be perceived as more
likable, friendly, warm, and approachable. Smiling is often contagious and
others will react favorably. They will be more comfortable around you and will
want to listen to you more.
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Gestures:
If you fail to gesture while speaking, you may be perceived as boring and
stiff. A lively speaking style captures attention, makes the material more
interesting, and facilitates understanding.
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Posture and body orientation: You communicate numerous messages by the
way you talk and move. Standing erect and leaning forward communicates that you
are approachable, receptive, and friendly. Interpersonal closeness results when
you and your audience face each other. Speaking with your back turned or
looking at the floor or ceiling should be avoided as it communicates
disinterest.
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Proximity:
Cultural norms dictate a comfortable distance for interaction with others. You
should look for signals of discomfort caused by invading other's space. Some of
these are: rocking, leg swinging, tapping, and gaze aversion. Typically, in
large rooms, space invasion is not a problem. In most instances there is too
much distance. To counteract this, move around the room to increase interaction
with your audience. Increasing the proximity enables you to make better eye
contact and increases the opportunities for others to speak.
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Voice.
One of the major criticisms of speakers is that they speak in a monotone voice.
Listeners perceive this type of speaker as boring and dull. People report that
they learn less and lose interest more quickly when listening to those who have
not learned to modulate their voices.
Good
speakers not only inform their audience, they also listen to them. By
listening, you know if they are understanding the information and if the information is important to them. Active
listening is NOT the same as hearing! Hearing is the
first part and consists of the perception of sound.
Listening,
the second part, involves an attachment of meaning to the aural symbols that
are perceived. Passive listening occurs when the receiver has little motivation
to listen carefully. Active listening with a purpose is used to gain
information, to determine how another person feels, and to understand others.
Some good traits of effective listeners are:
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Spend more time listening than talking (but of course, as a presenter,
you will be doing most of the talking).
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Do not finish the sentence of others.
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Do not answer questions with questions.
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Aware of biases. We all have them. We need to control them.
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Never daydream or become preoccupied with their own thoughts when others
talk.
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Let the other speaker talk. Do not dominate the conversation.
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Plan responses after others have finished speaking...NOT while they are
speaking. Their full concentration is on what others are saying, not on what
they are going to respond with.
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Provide feedback but do not interrupt incessantly.
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Analyze by looking at all the relevant factors and asking open-ended
questions. Walk the person through analysis (summarize).
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Keep the conversation on what the speaker says...NOT on what interest
them.
Listening
can be one of our most powerful communication tools! Be sure to use it!
Part
of the listening process is getting feedback by changing and altering the
message so the intention of the original communicator is understood by the second
communicator. This is done by paraphrasing the words of the sender and
restating the sender's feelings or ideas in your own words, rather than
repeating their words. Your words should be saying, “This is what I understand
your feelings to be, am I correct?” It not only includes verbal responses, but
also nonverbal ones. Nodding your head or squeezing their hand to show
agreement, dipping your eyebrows to show you don't quite understand the meaning
of their last phrase, or sucking air in deeply and blowing out hard shows that
you are also exasperated with the situation.
Carl
Rogers (1957) listed five main
categories of feedback (Demos, Zuwaylif, 1962). They are listed in the order in
which they occur most frequently in daily conversations (notice that we make
judgments more often than we try to understand):
1.
Evaluative: Makes a judgment about the worth,
goodness, or appropriateness of the other person's statement.
2.
Interpretive: Paraphrasing to explain what another
person's statement mean.
3.
Supportive: Attempt to assist or bolster the other
communicator
4.
Probing: Attempt to gain additional information,
continue the discussion, or clarify a point.
5.
Understanding: Attempt to discover completely what the
other communicator means by her statements.
The
main enemy of a presenter is tension, which ruins the voice, posture, and
spontaneity. The voice becomes higher as the throat tenses. Shoulders tighten up and limits flexibility while the legs start to shake and causes
unsteadiness. The presentation becomes canned as the speaker locks in on the notes and
starts to read directly from them.
First, do not fight nerves, welcome them! Then you can get on with the
presentation instead of focusing in on being nervous. Actors recognize the
value of nerves...they add to the value of the performance. This is because
adrenaline starts to kick in. It's a left over from our ancestors' “fight or
flight” syndrome. If you welcome nerves, then the presentation becomes a
challenge and you become better. If you let your nerves take over, then you go
into the flight mode by withdrawing from the audience. Again, welcome your
nerves, recognize them, let them help you gain that needed edge! Do not go into
the flight mode! When you feel tension or anxiety, remember that everyone gets
them, but the winners use them to their advantage, while the losers get
overwhelmed by them.
Tension
can be reduced by performing some relaxation exercises. Listed below are a
couple to get you started:
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Before the presentation: Lie on the floor. Your back should be flat on
the floor. Pull your feet towards you so that your knees are up in the air.
Relax. Close your eyes. Feel your back spreading out and supporting your
weight. Feel your neck lengthening. Work your way through your body, relaxing
one section at a time — your toes, feet, legs, torso, etc. When finished, stand
up slowly and try to maintain the relaxed feeling in a standing position.
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If you cannot lie down: Stand with you feet about 6 inches apart, arms
hanging by your sides, and fingers unclenched. Gently shake each part of your
body, starting with your hands, then arms, shoulders, torso, and legs.
Concentrate on shaking out the tension. Then slowly rotate your shoulders
forwards and the backwards. Move on to your head. Rotate it slowly clockwise,
and then counter-clockwise.
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Mental Visualization: Before the presentation, visualize the room,
audience, and you giving the presentation. Mentally go over what you are going
to do from the moment you start to the end of the presentation.
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During the presentation: Take a moment to yourself by getting a drink of
water, take a deep breath, concentrate on relaxing the most tense part of your
body, and then return to the presentation saying to yourself, “I can do it!”
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You do NOT need to get rid of anxiety and tension! Channel the energy
into concentration and expressiveness.
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Know that anxiety and tension is not as noticeable to the audience as it
is to you.
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Know that even the best presenters make mistakes. The key is to continue
on after the mistake. If you pick up and continue, so will the audience.
Winners continue! Losers stop!
o
Never drink alcohol to reduce tension! It affects not only your
coordination but also your awareness of coordination. You might not realize it,
but your audience will!
Keep
cool if a questioner disagrees with you. You are a professional! No matter how
hard you try, not everyone in the world will agree with you!
Although
some people get a perverse pleasure from putting others on the spot, and some
try to look good in front of the boss, most people ask questions from a genuine
interest. Questions do not mean you did not explain the topic good enough, but
that their interest is deeper than the average audience.
Always allow time at the end of the presentation for questions. After
inviting questions, do not rush ahead if no one asks a question. Pause for
about 6 seconds to allow the audience to gather their thoughts. When a question
is asked, repeat the question to ensure that everyone heard it (and that you
heard it correctly). When answering, direct your remarks to the entire
audience. That way, you keep everyone focused, not just the questioner. To
reinforce your presentation, try to relate the question back to the main
points.
Make
sure you listen to the question being asked. If you do not understand it, ask
them to clarify. Pause to think about the question as the answer you give may
be correct, but ignore the main issue. If you do not know the answer, be
honest, do not waffle. Tell them you will get back to them... and make sure you
do!
Answers
that last 10 to 40 seconds work best. If they are too short, they seem abrupt;
while longer answers appear too elaborate. Also, be sure to keep on track. Do
not let off-the-wall questions sidetrack you into areas that are not relevant
to the presentation.
If
someone takes issue with something you said, try to find a way to agree with
part of their argument. For example, “Yes, I understand your position...” or
“I'm glad you raised that point, but...” The idea is to praise their point and
agree with them as audiences sometimes tend to think of “us verses you.” You do
not want to risk alienating them.
After
a concert, a fan rushed up to famed violinist Fritz Kreisler and gushed, “I'd
give up my whole life to play as beautifully as you do.” Kreisler replied, “I
did.”
The
first step of a great presentations is preplanning. Preparing for a
presentation basically follows the same guidelines as a meeting (a helpful guide on preparing and conducting
a meeting, such as acquiring a room, informing participants, etc.)
The
second step is to prepare the presentation. A good presentation starts out with
introductions and may include an icebreaker such as a story, interesting statement or
fact, or an activity to get the group warmed up. The introduction also needs an
objective, that is, the purpose or goal of the presentation. This not only
tells you what you will talk about, but it also informs the audience of the
purpose of the presentation.
Next,
comes the body of the presentation. Do NOT write it out word for word. All you
want is an outline. By jotting down the main points on a set of index cards,
you not only have your outline, but also a memory jogger for the actual
presentation. To prepare the presentation, ask yourself the following:
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What is the purpose of the presentation?
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Who will be attending?
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What does the audience already know about the subject?
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What is the audience's attitude towards me (e.g. hostile, friendly)?
A
45 minutes talk should have no more than about seven main points. This may not
seem like very many, but if you are to leave the audience with a clear picture
of what you have said, you cannot expect them to remember much more than that.
There are several options for structuring the presentation:
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Timeline:
Arranged in sequential order.
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Climax:
The main points are delivered in order of increasing importance.
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Problem/Solution: A problem is presented, a solution is suggested, and benefits are then
given.
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Classification: The important items are the major points.
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Simple to complex: Ideas are listed from the simplest to the most complex. Can also be
done in reverse order.
You
want to include some visual information that will help the audience understand
your presentation. Develop charts, graphs, slides, handouts, etc.
After
the body, comes the closing. This is where you ask for questions, provide a
wrap-up (summary), and thank the participants for attending.
Notice
that you told them what they are about to hear (the objective), told them (the
body), and told them what they heard (the wrap up).
And
finally, the important part — practice, practice, practice. The main purpose of
creating an outline is to develop a coherent plan of what you want to talk
about. You should know your presentation so well, that during the actual
presentation, you should only have to briefly glance at your notes to ensure
you are staying on track. This will also help you with your nerves by giving
you the confidence that you can do it. Your practice session should include a
live session by practicing in front of coworkers, family, or friends. They can
be valuable at providing feedback and it gives you a chance to practice
controlling your nerves. Another great feedback technique is to make a video or
audio tape of your presentation and review it critically with a colleague.
We
all have a few habits, and some are more annoying than others. For example, if
we say “uh”, “you know,” or put our hands in our pockets and jingle our keys
too often during a presentation, it distracts from the message we are trying to
get across.
The
best way to break one of these distracting habits is with immediate feedback.
This can be done with a small group of coworkers, family, or friends. Take
turns giving small off-the-cuff talks about your favorite hobby, work project,
first work assignment, etc. The talk should last about five minutes. During a
speaker's first talk, the audience should listen and watch for annoying habits.
After
the presentation, the audience should agree on the worst two or three habits
that take the most away from the presentation. After agreement, each audience
member should write these habits on a 8 1/2 "x 11" sheet of paper
(such as the word “Uh”). Use a magic marker and write in BIG letters.
The
next time the person gives her or his talk, each audience member should wave
the corresponding sign in the air whenever they hear or see the annoying habit.
For most people, this method will break a habit by practicing at least once a
day for one to two weeks.
Your
slides should not only be engaging, but also easy to understand quickly
(Reynolds, 2008). Think “Visual” — such as pictures, charts, and drawings that
support what you will be speaking about. You want the slides to support and
clarify the story you will be telling rather than simply be redundant text that
mimics what you are saying.
Eleanor
Roosevelt was a shy young girl who was terrified at the thought of speaking in
public. But with each passing year, she grew in confidence and self-esteem. She
once said, “No one can make you feel inferior, unless you agree with it.”
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If you have handouts, do not read straight from them. The audience does
not know if they should read along with you or listen to you read.
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Do not put both hands in your pockets for long periods of time. This
tends to make you look unprofessional. It is OK to put one hand in a pocket but
ensure there is no loose change or keys to jingle around. This will distract
the listeners.
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Do not wave a pointer around in the air like a wild knight branding a
sword to slay a dragon. Use the pointer for what it is intended and then put it
down, otherwise the audience will become fixated upon your “sword”, instead
upon you.
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Do not lean on the podium for long periods. The audience will begin to
wonder when you are going to fall over.
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Speak to the audience...NOT to the visual aids, such as flip charts or
overheads. Also, do not stand between the visual aid and the audience.
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Speak clearly and loudly enough for all to hear. Do not speak in a
monotone voice. Use inflection to emphasize your main points.
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The disadvantages of presentations are that people cannot see the
punctuation and this can lead to misunderstandings. An effective way of
overcoming this problem is to pause at the time when there would normally be
punctuation marks.
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Learn the name of each participant as quickly as possible. Based upon
the atmosphere you want to create, call them by their first names or by using
Mr., Mrs., Miss, Ms.
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Tell them what name and title you prefer to be called.
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Listen intently to comments and opinions. By using a lateral thinking technique (adding to ideas rather than dismissing
them), the audience will feel that their ideas, comments, and opinions are
worthwhile.
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Circulate around the room as you speak. This movement creates a physical
closeness to the audience.
o
List and discuss your objectives at the beginning of the presentation.
Let the audience know how your presentation fits in with their goals. Discuss
some of the fears and apprehensions that both you and the audience might have.
Tell them what they should expect of you and how you will contribute to their
goals.
o
Vary your techniques (lecture, discussion, debate, films, slides,
reading, etc.)
o
Get to the presentation before your audience arrives; be the last one to
leave.
o
Be prepared to use an alternate approach if the one you've chosen seems
to bog down. You should be confident enough with your own material so that the
audience's interests and concerns, not the presentation outline, determines the
format. Use your background, experience, and knowledge to interrelate your
subject matter.
o
When writing on flip charts use no more than 7 lines of text per page
and no more than 7 words per line (the 7 x 7 rule). Also, use bright and bold
colors, and pictures as well as text.
o
Consider the time of day and how long you have got for your talk. Time
of day can affect the audience. After lunch is known as the graveyard section
in training and speaking circles as audiences will feel more like a nap than
attending a presentation.
o
Most people find that if they practice in their head, the actual talk
will take about 25 percent longer. Using a flip chart or other visual aids also
adds to the time. Remember — it is
better to finish slightly early than to overrun.
Outline
for presentations at final exams ("defenses") of doctoral
dissertations
General
comments:
(a)
Defenses usually consist of a presentation no longer than 45 minutes, followed
by questioning from one to two hours. Expect to be interrupted for short
clarification questions during the presentation. Questions after the
presentation typically explore the assumptions, limitations, extensions, and
applications of the dissertation work.
(b) The
defense is intended to be a "public" presentation. That means
you should design it not for your doctoral committee but for intelligent
listeners in the field in which you are getting the Ph.D. Avoid acronyms and
other jargon as much as possible. Your committee's vote on your performance
will put significant weight on how you handled questions from nonmembers of the
committee.
(c) As
with presentations at science and engineering conferences, you should rehearse
your talk in advance. It is best to give a practice run for your entire
dissertation committee, but at least you should present it orally to your
dissertation supervisor. The practice run should help both with judging
the length of the talk and finding things that can be improved.
(e) The
core of your presentation should be a set of novel claims from your work and
the validation of your claims. This is supplemented with how these claims
relate to prior work and what is different about them, plus speculations about
future implications of what you have done.
Outline:
NOTE:
Slide counts recommended below are for 28 point font. Do not use font
smaller than this for exams with videoconferencing, and less than 20 point
otherwise, with the possible exception of important figures and tables that
cannot be compressed.
1. What
problem are you addressing (1-2 slides). Focus on the primary problem if
there is more than one.
2. Why
this problem is important (1 slide).
3. What
contributions you have made that no one previously has done (1-2 slides).
The contributions must be to the field of the degree. State them as
claims. Most of the remainder of your presentation will be the validation
of your claims.
4.
Previous work addressing the same problem with different methods than yours
(1-3 slides, depending on the topic). Give names of researchers and
summarize succinctly what they did. Explain why previous work didn't
solve your problem completely.
5.
Previous work addressing different problems with similar techniques to those
you used in the dissertation work (2-5 slides, depending on the topic).
This can be short if you used well-known techniques.
6.
Design of the validation for each of your claims (5-15 slides). The validation
can include experiments, tests, and proofs. If you built something, this
is where you describe it. Note that validation can be of design as well
as of implementation, although validation of an implementation is more
convincing. Thorough validation is the key feature distinguishing Ph.D.
dissertations from Master's theses.
7.
Results of the validation of each of your claims (2-10 slides). Usually this is
presented in the form of statistics and some analysis of data that has been
collected.
8.
Conclusions: How your validated claims have contributed to the solution of the
original problem (1-2 slides).
9.
Broader implications: Why your work is useful to society (1-2 slides).
Total:
15-42 slides
Learn
the basic outline for any oral presentation. Most
consist of four parts:
1.
Introduction
2.
Body
3.
Closing
The
introduction to an oral presentation usually includes these components:
Your name and other identifying marks you want to
include (title, organization usually)
The title of your presentation, including the
type of presentation it is(report, proposal, design review, etc.)
The motivation for discussing your topic
Forecasting the contents of your talk (if your
talk is over five minutes)
To
lend structure to your oral presentation, repeat key phrases from your
introductory overheads throughout
your presentation.
For
further discussion and examples of overheads, see Examples of Materials for
an Oral Presentation: A Design Review.
The
body of an oral presentation includes these elements:
An elaboration of the background of your topic, such as a theory or hypotheses for an
experimental approach or procedure
Development
of specific content relevant to the type of report you are giving: citing equations, displaying relevant graphs or other figures (see Preparing Overheads and
Other Display Media), presenting results and discussion of those
results
The
closing of an oral presentation includes these elements:
A summary statement of your conclusions or
recommendations, or other material suited to your report type (such as time schedules in a proposal)
A request for
questions from the audience where that is expected and appropriate
In
the question-and-answer period, you do the following things:
You
should try to anticipate what kinds of questions you may be asked and prepare viewgraphs for this
possibility.
Begin
every technical document except a memorandum with a clear and specific title.
Prospective readers may judge whether your document will be worth their time
just be reading the title. The subject line of a memo serves as the title.
Long
formal documents have a separate title page. For shorter documents, a title
page may be required, optional, or unnecessary, depending on the specific
context and conventions in your field.
A
title page should include the title, the author or authors, their affiliation
(if appropriate), and the date. It may also include additional information,
such as a specific grant or project number.
If you are focusing on a problem,
be sure to define and state it specifically enough that you can write about it.
Avoid trying to investigate or write about multiple problems or about broad or
overly ambitious problems. Vague problem definition leads to unsuccessful
proposals and vague, unmanageable documents. Naming a topic is not the same as
defining a problem.
If
appropriate, state your document's objective at the beginning. Readers of
technical writing are often busy people; such a statement will alert them that
it is important to read further.
The
following opening sentence from a memorandum by an engineer at Morton Thiokol
warning his superiors of the problem that later caused the explosion of the
space shuttle Challenger provides
an example of a good statement of objective.
Present
the whole before the parts. One of the common problems in reading science and
engineering materials is that of trying to understand the context of the
discussion. Give your reader a general view of where you are going before you
plunge into the details. This principle applies to the introductions of documents, as well as to the
openings of document sections.
Thesis Defense Guidelines
General Guidelines
•Defense should
summarize thesis
•Do not count on all
committee members to have given your thesis a thorough reading prior to the
defense
•Present enough
information for members to understand what you did, why you did it, and what
the implications are of what you did.
Also include suggestions for future research
More Guidelines
•Satisfy your advisor
first and foremost!!!
•No surprises! Advisor should not learn anything new in the
defense
•You are not ready to
defend until your advisor thinks you are
•Try to keep rest of
committee informed, but advisor is most important
Preparing Presentation
•Make sure text is large
enough to be readable
•Ensure any inserted
graphics, tables, etc. are clear
•Use spellcheck, but
ALSO proofread. Do both, not one or the
other
•Save often, keep
multiple copies - (Murphy’s law inevitably strikes, just be ready to recover)
Preparing to Present
•If using overhead
–Test machine ahead of
time (days in advance and on day of event)
–Arrive early to set up
–Make sure transparencies
are numbered (in case you drop them)
–Have paper copies as a
backup (in case machine or power fails)
Preparing to Present
•If using computer:
–Load presentation and
test machine ahead of time (do not be struggling with machine operation during
the defense)
–Arrive early to set up
–Have transparencies
and/or paper copies as a backup (in case machine or power fails)
Fielding Questions
•Decide to take
questions at end or during presentation
•Questions may be
inquisitive, curious, or hostile
–Inquisitive:committee
member wants you to bring out an area of your research you didn’t explain to
his satisfaction
–Curious: committee
member simply wants to know more about what you did or the field under study
–Hostile: committee
member is trying to expose an area of inadequacy
Inquisitive Question
•Answer question to best
of your ability
•Never try to answer
more than you know
•At this point you
should know everything related to your specific research problem, but nowhere
near everything related to your field
•Allow advisor to step
in (only if he initiates)
•If a question goes
beyond the scope of your research - and you do not know it - explain that you
don’t know and that your research is not intended to address that area
Curious Question
•Answer question if you
can
•Good to show relevance
of your work to other areas of study, particularly those of interest to other
committee members
•Do not let the defense
spend a lot of time on unrelated areas
Hostile Question
•Don’t let the question
get to you - remain professional
•Sometimes a case of a
committee member out to get you; or a conflict between two committee members;
or evidence that you didn’t do all the work you were supposed to do
•Answer to best of
ability, but DO NOT fake answers
•Best if your advisor
comes to your rescue
•If committee member is
flat out wrong, point out error, but do not engage in an argument with him
•If you are wrong, admit
the error and move on as quickly as possible
Preparing for a Thesis Defense
Upon the approval of
your thesis committee and the appointment of an external examiner,
the date for your
defense is selected. The thesis defense committee includes the three
members of your thesis
committee plus an external reviewer.
The thesis defense may
be, arguably, the most important step in the thesis process.
Although it may seem
intimidating, the defense provides you with the opportunity to share your
research with peers, colleagues, and members of the community at large. It
allows you to showcase your efforts and present your findings in a supportive
environment.
There are two parts to
a thesis defense:
(a) the presentation of
the findings by the student,
and (b) questions by
the thesis defense committee (and others present) that follows this
presentation.
The thesis defense presentation:
The development of your
thesis presentation is your first opportunity to showcase your work. Your
presentation should be about one-half hour long and should concentrate on your
findings and recommendations. A sample outline of your presentation might look
like this:
• goal/objectives of
the research (2 min)
• literature
review/theoretical framework (5 min)
• methodology (5 min)
• findings (10 min)
• recommendations (5
min)
Hint: Practice your
presentation at home. This will help increase your comfort level with the
slides and speakers notes, the timing of each piece of your presentation and
allow you to remain within the recommended time for the presentation. Practice
will provide you with the means to speak to your work without relying on your
speakers notes word-for-word. Some of the best presentations I’ve seen are done
by those who don’t have to rely on their speakers notes, but can expand on
their statements in their own words.
The findings and
recommendations are the crux of your thesis defense presentation. The
literature review, theoretical framework and methodological/ethical issues
should form the backdrop and context for these findings.
Hint: Develop your
presentation starting with your findings and recommendations and work
backwards. By understanding which pieces of your literature review and
theoretical framework are needed to support your findings, you will ensure all
of the appropriate information is included. This also helps you make decisions
about the inclusion of extraneous information, which may be interesting but may
not support your findings and recommendations.
Preparation
Go to defences: The best
way to find out what happens in a defence is to make a point of going to
several defences before your own. You will likely feel much more comfortable
and assured when you see the best and worst that can happen, and take note of
examples to emulate and to avoid.
Timing: For our
department, plan your presentation to run about 20-25 minutes, 30 min. max!
Remember, the presentation is primarily for the benefit of the Examination
Committee, not for additional people who may wander in to listen--it's not a
public lecture!--and the Exam Committee will all have read your thesis. They
don't need or want an exhaustive description.
Contributions: Don't be
modest; be clear on your contributions! If someone asks, "Why should you
get a degree?," how will you justify yourself? "I've been here 2
years" won't cut it.
Turn on slide numbering. This
makes it easy for viewers to jot them down and then say, "Please go back
to slide 23..." With PowerPoint you can press 2-3-Enter and zap right to
the given number.
Avoid using acronyms on the
slides without defining them. Some presenters successfully put the spelled-out
version elsewhere on the same slide in small font, so people who don't know the
acronym can see the meaning, while not distracting from the main points.
Identify slides that you can afford to skip
over if you see time is getting tight. Some Exam Chairs will cut you
off, so don't assume you can talk forever.
Think of some expected questions and
prepare some extra slides to answer them (the dry run really helps for this,
see next point).
Rehearsal: Do a "dry
run" with faculty and grad students from your research group. Pay
attention to their suggestions for improvement, but realize that "you
can't please everyone" and tastes will differ.
Paper copy: Make sure you
bring along a copy of your own thesis, since numerous questions will take the
form "On page 25, what did you mean by...?" or "Table 3-1 is not
clearly labelled," etc. You will need to be able to turn rapidly to those
references and give a suitable explanation. Do not make the mistake of bringing
a later revision of your thesis than the one handed out to the
committee! Such things make the defence ridiculous and annoying for the
examiners.
If
your Advisory Committee has approved the thesis as "defensible," you
will almost certainly pass and get your degree. Don't worry about that! So what
is really at stake?
1. Everyone wants to look good: You want to
look smart, your supervisor wants to be proud of you, the examiners want to
look insightful and thorough, and the department wants to maintain high
standards. You should contribute to all of that, and not undermine it by being
poorly prepared, disrespectful, sloppily dressed, late arriving, showing
irritation or anger, and so on. Do not attempt to "pressurize" the
examiners into giving you a break: "My plane is leaving on Monday"
"My new job is starting tomorrow" "I can't afford to pay more
tuition." Respect the integrity of the process, and take what the
examiners dish out without complaining.
2. You want to minimize your
"damage": this refers to how much additional work you have to put
into corrections and revisions. At worst, examiners will demand more research
and/or experiments, and they will insist on rereading the thesis before they
sign off. That could take you weeks, even months! At best, there will be some
minor wording improvements, checked only by your supervisor. Ordinarily, you'll
be asked to insert or clarify some explanations. If you explain your work well
and answer questions well, it is less likely that many or major revisions will
be demanded.
3. Taking a philosophical view, whether the
revisions are little or much trouble, they will make your thesis a better
document . Admittedly, it's possible that no one may ever read your
thesis again; but it's also likely that you or your supervisor will write one
or more articles based on your thesis, in order to disseminate your work. If
the thesis is better because of the revisions, those articles may be more
publishable and/or easier to write. If you are continuing in an academic or
research career, high quality publications in reputable conferences and journals
are extremely valuable to you.
4. Occasionally, a defence will transcend a
mundane rite of passage. For this to happen, the examiners must really be
engaged with the research and the student, and the "chemistry" will
be right. At such times, the questions, the speculation, the theorizing, the
discussion, the proposals, the unexpected connections that spontaneously flow
can open up fruitful avenues of research and even answer open problems. If you
attend even one such defence--let alone your own--you will feel that it was an
honour and a pleasure, and that this is what academe is supposed to be about.
"Defence" implies
"attack." Expect to be attacked, and take a confident attitude
anyway. Probably you know more than anyone in the room on your particular
topic, so don't feel frightened!
Answering
questions from the examiners:
Examiners get annoyed when (a) students don't
understand their questions, (b) students don't answer them directly, forcing
them to repeat/reword, (c) students blab too much, using up the limited defence
time. Annoyed examiners tend to demand MORE REVISIONS, then you will be sorry.
Pay careful attention to questions and try to
answer what is really asked! If you must, frankly ask, "Can you please
repeat that?" Don't let your mouth run on beyond the basic answer, or you
may say something flaky that invites more probing. Be aware that an outside
examiner with insufficient background in your area may really ask a "dumb
question," but you should give a polite answer that doesn't appear to put
them down.
Don't look pleadingly at your supervisor(s)
for help! It's your thesis, not theirs. If they sense you need help, they can
ask some leading "softball" questions during their turns, and they
always get the last questions by convention. If you look at them anxiously, you
may trigger them to speak out on your behalf, which is bad form, makes them
look silly, and may earn a rebuke from the Exam Chair. They can advocate your
case after the defence is over, behind closed doors while your
fate is being discussed.
Don't worry about writing down everything
people say needs to be changed in your thesis. Your supervisor(s) will keep
careful notes of this for you.
Will the general audience ask questions?
If there is time and the Exam Chair invites them to, they may. But you should
not invite them; it is the Exam Chair who is running the defence.
When
the questions are over--typically there will be two rounds, and the Exam Chair
may or may not ask some--you will be thanked for your presentation and put out
of the room, along with any other audience members. Hopefully, some supporters
will keep you company in the hallway, so you don't get too anxious.
The
examiners will then decide, first, whether you have passed, and second, what
revisions are required. (In our department, you can pass even if one examiner
dissents.) These can be either major --meaning that the
examiners feel strongly enough about them that they want to reread the thesis
themselves before signing off--or minor , left to your
supervisor(s) to wind up. In rare cases, no revisions at all are required, but
do not expect that outcome, no matter how wonderful you and your supervisor(s)
think your thesis is. During this discussion, your supervisor(s) will advocate
on your behalf and clear up any misunderstandings, but they will try to be open
to input from their peers who may legitimately disagree with them. If there is
an external examiner (say, for a Ph.D. defence), their expert opinion will be
taken very seriously, since they were selected for that purpose.
If
things go smoothly this phase may take as little as ten minutes. Eventually you
will be called back into the room, most likely congratulated on passing, and
then the demanded revisions will be outlined. Most likely, it will be left to
your supervisor(s) to detail the revisions. If the examiners ask for more
revisions than you wanted, this is not the time to argue and
pout. Instead, accept their criticisms graciously.
Finally,
if you truly feel you have been unfairly abused by the examination process--it
does happen rarely--talk with your supervisor(s), the faculty member in charge
of the graduate program, the Chair, and the Dean of Graduate Studies. Work your
way up the chain until someone listens to you. Ask the Graduate Student Union
for advice. There will be some avenue of appeal that can see the injustice
rectified, so you don't have to become a "victim."
THE DEFENCE
Structure of Examination
For a thesis defence, a
Chair is appointed by the Dean of the Faculty of Graduate Studies. They can ask
questions if they choose, but will primarily chair the examination. For a
project, the external examiner and the Chair is the same person, and the Chair
is expected to ask questions. After introductory comments, the student presents
the research (in less than 20 minutes). Then, questioning begins, starting with
the external examiner (for a project, the community member/client starts the
questioning), then committee members, and finally the supervisor. After
questions are exhausted (usually after 90 to 120 minutes), the student is asked
to leave the room while the committee deliberates on whether the thesis as
presented is satisfactory and whether the oral defence of the thesis was
satisfactory. The student is then called back to the room and the decisions are
shared.
The chair of the
examination is asked to send a report of the examination to the Dean.
Suggestions for Preparation for the Defense
• Prepare and practice
your presentation. It should NOT exceed 20 minutes. The presentation should
focus on: what you have done; why you have done it; how you did it; what you
found; and what the implications are.
• If you are planning
to use an LCD projector, ensure that you are familiar with the equipment and
you know what to do if there is a technical problem. This is not the time to
use Power Point and an LCD projector if you never have before.
• It is acceptable to
acknowledge that you don’t know the answer or hadn’t thought about the
question. It is usually better to do that than to guess or make up a response.
You can ask to have a question repeated. Also, you can indicate that you hadn’t
thought about the topic, but could speculate that …..
• Review your thesis
before the defence and think about possible questions that might arise. While
it’s useful to be familiar with your citations and sources, it is not necessary
to re-read every article that you cited in the literature review.
• You may wish to do a
“mock defence” with your supervisor or with some friends
• Avoid
overgeneralization of your findings.
• Highlight areas in
your thesis, where you may be asked questions (e.g.,
limitations) using
post-it notes so you can find them quickly.
• Sit in on some other
defences to get a sense of what they are like.
Typical Questions
• Based on your
findings, what will your next research project be?
• How would you
summarize your findings to a practitioner in a few sentences?
• How can your research
be used in practice?
• Why did you select
the method?
• What would you change
if you were to do the study again?
Tips and Hints
• In consultation with
your supervisor, select the external examiner carefully. They play a key role
and often set the tone
• Check out the room in
advance. Feel free to rearrange the furniture or “make the room your own”.
• If your approach to
the defence is out of the ordinary (e.g., different opening/closing) or you
have specific request regarding the process, contact the chair of the examination
in advance
• Don’t prepare
refreshments for the committee
• Know the work and
perspectives of your internal and external examiners; it will give you some
clues as to the types of questions they might be interested in
• Be prepared to make
revisions afterward – that is normal
• Don’t worry if the
committee takes longer than you think they should. They may be discussing other
things.
• Don’t expect your
supervisor to respond to questions for you or advocate for you during the
examination.
• Ensure that your
thesis is in great shape before you distribute it to committee members. It is
not their role to edit your paper.
• It is acceptable to
hire a professional editor to help you check grammar and references.
• A useful strategy, if
you get a question that you can’t answer, is to ask the examiner to rephrase
the question. It may give you more time to think.
• Plan to meet with
your supervisor after the examination to review requested
changes while it is
fresh in his/her mind.
• The defence is open
to the university community and the public. You can invite
colleagues, friends,
and family members if you would find that helpful/supportive. If more people
will make you more nervous, don’t invite them.
• Remember to bring the
signature pages (2 pages, 2 copies minimum) – ensure that names and
departments are accurate.
Practical Tipsfor Preparing forthe ThesisDefense
The thesis defense is a long‐awaited and hard‐earned personal event, as well as a major professional presentation. Obviously, you want to be mentally prepared for a discussion and explanation of your work, and putting forth a good impression through appearance and conduct is an important part of a successful defense. You probably have loads of questions about the minutia of a thesis defense; the following will help answer a few of them.
Where should I turn for tips on resources for my defense? Your first stop should be to see your advisor. Your advisor will guide you through all the necessary stages. He or she will also know the habits and personalities of perspective committee members, and may be able to share insights concerning your selection of committee members. In addition to guiding you through your committee member selections, your advisor will also communicate with these members, allowing you advance notice of what to expect in the way of their conduct during the actual defense. Develop a good working relationship with your advisor. Also, do not hesitate to talk to other graduate students; they can be a good source of practical ideas and tips for preparing for this important occasion.
Is there some way to know what a defense is like, in advance? Yes. Professors highly recommend attending at least one (if not more) defense in your discipline, as a way of getting to know what the general process entails.
What are the most important last minute things to do when preparing for my defense? Professors invariably give the same response: be prepared! Do all the necessary “last minute” prep work for your defense at least two days before the actual defense. Be sure that you have all the necessary materials ready to go. Review your thesis thoroughly before the defense; all aspects of your research should be fresh in your mind. You may be sick of the material by this time, but you’ve got to stay intimately involved with it until after the defense is successfully completed. Most importantly, be prepared to think quickly while on your feet!
What should I wear to my defense? Women should wear conservative attire—the type of two‐piece garment appropriate in an office environment—of a reasonable, non‐garish color. Avoid wearing shoes that have an extremely high heel, and do not wear gym shoes. Choose footwear that is comfortable and business‐like.
Men should wear standard formal attire: a jacket, dress shirt, and tie, conservative slacks, and dress shoes. Under no circumstances should men wear gym shoes to their defense.
I’m very nervous. What should I do to combat this feeling? Feeling nervous about the defense is quite normal.
Most professors offer similar responses: get plenty of rest the night before your defense, and if you practice some type of relaxation technique or mediation, by all means, do it. You will want to look and feel as refreshed as possible, and have the energy and concentration to respond intelligently to the questions posed to you.
How should I conduct myself during my defense? During the defense, you should conduct yourself confidently and professionally, and be well prepared to give a knowledgeable presentation of your work. Be conscious of not talking too fast and mindful of speaking clearly and loudly enough to be heard. If you gesture, do so in a natural manner, and don’t fidget while giving your presentation. Remember to be respectful of your colleagues and the academic environment—avoid coming across as arrogant, defensive, or dismissive. However, don’t forget that this is your opportunity to shine; you are the expert concerning your research.
How do I avoid “freezing up”? Try to anticipate problems that could arise with your defense, in advance. What are
the most challenging questions that you might be asked? Plan and practice your responses. In other words, again,
be thoroughly prepared; this is the largest component to avoid “freezing up.” The confidence that comes from
knowing your material is more than half the ammunition needed for the defense. In the face of difficulty, stay
centered, take a moment to gather your thoughts, take a deep breath, and…begin speaking.
I’ve heard that some committee
members ask tangential questions during a defense. How do I handle that? If a
committee member asked a question that
falls outside the scope of your work, try not to get confused and
flustered. Usually this sort of question stresses something the committee member thinks is significant. Give an honest answer, if you can—you may have to make a quick mental reference to the critical views of your topic. You
should be familiar with the current research to avoid being caught with your pants down during your defense;
otherwise, rely on your knowledge of your own topic to give a cogent response.
Can my friends and family help me get through this? Yes. Use them as a test audience for your defense. These individuals may not be able to offer academic comments, but they can offer tips on your defenses strengths and weaknesses, in terms of your delivery. In addition, arrange to have at least one family member or friend meet you after your (successful) defense, to help you celebrate your accomplishment.
The
Dissertation Defense: Being well-defended in a good way
The thought of the dissertation defense often elicits
anxiety in addition to raising a slew of anxiety-provoking questions: What will
they ask? What if I cannot answer? What if they want revisions? What if I fail?
Reframing the dissertation defense as a dissertation presentation is a
more user-friendly perspective as well as a more accurate one. The fact is, if
you already have the defense date, rather, the presentation date set, the brunt
of the work is complete. The defense is your ability to present the research in
a knowledgeable and confident way.
There are both logistical and psychological
considerations to be taken into account when preparing for the dissertation
defense. Generally there is about a month between the submission of the final
draft and the defense date. This time delay reflects the time needed to
coordinate professors' busy schedules as well as giving them time to read it.
In this month, you have time to focus on two goals 1) planning your
presentation and 2) calming your nerves. Knowing yourself, your committee, and
your work are key components in achieving these goals.
Mental Preparation
Know thyself. Everyone experiences and copes with anxiety-provoking situations
differently. Here is where knowing yourself is critical. Knowing your personal
style in how you deal with anxiety provoking situations lets you plan
accordingly.
If you tend to over-plan, limit how much time you will
spend on preparing the actual defense, and focus on trying to relax and reduce
your level of anxiety. If you know you tend to avoid or procrastinate, work on
the defense presentation promptly to avoid last minute planning. If you know
that you tend to become highly anxious in these types of situations, you may
need to spend less time on the defense and more time on learning to relax.
Practice self-care, such as regular exercise, socializing, or planning for your
post-defense celebrations.
Know your committee. Consider a last meeting with the committee members
prior to the defense to get an idea of what their questions or perspectives are
on the research. If this is not possible, review the feedback that committee
members have already given you and how you responded to it in your draft. They
are very likely to bring up these questions within the defense. Though
experiences vary, it may be helpful to ask colleagues who had the same
professors on their committees what their experiences were like with these
professors.
Optimally, your chair and colleagues have advised you
of any issues to be aware of regarding committee composition. With the case of
"thorny" committee members, consult with your chair on how to
minimize tensions or address the matter. This should not be anything terribly new
to your graduate student's repertoire of skills.
Forget the urban myth (fantasy?) that they "don't
even read it." The professors have a vested interest in the program's
reputation, would they really sign off on anything? It is true that they
will not know your dissertation like the backs of their hands-that's your job.
Trust that they will be familiar with it and that they will have expertise and
questions intended to help improve the dissertation. Though in the student role
it may be hard to grasp, you are the expert on this project.
Logistics of the presentation
The structure and process of the dissertation defense
can vary widely across programs, therefore talk with your chair and other
students to find out what may be unique to your program. Some defenses are open
to the general public/department, while others may be less public. Generally
speaking, you can expect the dissertation defense to last about 1½ - 2
hours, after which, you will be asked to leave the room for about 10-15 minutes
while they discuss the merit of your work. You will then be asked to rejoin
them in the room, where they generally greet you with, "Congratulations,
Doctor."
Presentation requirements may range from presenting
your findings to not preparing anything and letting the committee "just
start talking." For those that will be asked to present their findings,
include your chair in the defense preparation. Ask him/her if there are any
particular preferences he/she has. It is to your advantage to show your chair
the presentation outline in advance so he/she has an idea of how you are
presenting the research. Remembering that your committee members are often your
chair's longtime colleagues, he/she will have important insights into what to
expect in terms of your committee members' style in dissertation defenses.
In the interest of professionalism, using Power Point
instead of overheads is highly encouraged. Though programs vary, plan a 10-15
minute presentation for the two-hour presentation. This time frame may appear
brief, but when you consider the interruptions and questions, your presentation
will easily expand to a two-hour discussion. Another urban myth is that during
the defense, the professors spend a lot of time arguing points with each other:
this is actually true. This is a good thing: the more time they spend debating
each other, the less time you are in the hot seat. Pay attention to their
points of argument because they are often relevant to include in the revisions.
As you create the outline for the slide presentation,
remember that the objective is to focus on the results and discussion sections
of the dissertation. Do not feel obligated to include the literature review to
set up the presentation. Though it seems counterintuitive not to address the
literature review given all the hours you spent on it, the committee is more
interested in hearing about your work. In the case that some of the committee
members may be unfamiliar with the uniqueness of the statistics, issues of
diversity, etc., you may consider including brief background information for
their benefit.
1. Start by reviewing the research questions and
the instruments and analyses used. Remind them why the research questions
are relevant and/or lack of current research on the topic.
2. Then, get straight to the point and
present the findings. Make it short and sweet: "Regular sleep was
positively related to a good mood" and present the data to support your
conclusions.
3. Stick to what you know. Do not feel the need
to have an overhead for every point you want to make-you do not have to present
all your findings. Just as your discussion highlights some results more
than others, the defense will likely focus on the more interesting findings as
well.
4. Focus their attention. Remember that
whatever you present, either in overheads or orally, you are opening yourself
up to questioning. If you are not that comfortable with statistics, consider
minimizing the number of tables you present on overheads (instead refer to the
table/page orally). Again, just as your discussion may emphasize and explore
some findings more than others, it is acceptable for you to focus your defense
in a similar manner. Practically speaking, it is simply not possible to discuss
all the nuances of a 200-page research project within 2 hours.
5. Practice with an audience beforehand. Because
you have probably been looking at this dissertation for a minimum of 243 light
years, fresh eyes will ensure that you are making smooth transitions and a
clear presentation. Practicing in the actual room in which you will be
defending is highly advisable, especially if you will be able to test-run using
Power Point, a laptop, or other audio-visual aids.
6. Project professionalism. Dressing in formal
attire will contribute to your credibility and perception as a future
colleague. Though completely optional, you may also consider providing
beverages, even just bottled water, to further create a professional
atmosphere.
Being in the Room
Once you are at the defense stage of the doctoral process,
you probably have a greater appreciation that the dissertation is more a test
of perseverance than of intellect. It is more a mind game with yourself than
with the committee. Reminding yourself of the following during the defense
should help you focus on the reality of the situation, not on your nerves.
Reality 1: You are the "expert". This might
feel uncomfortable or arrogant, but consider how many articles you have read
and all the time you have invested. You did all the work to synthesize the information
into a draft to inform the committee members about your work. In the midst of
all the anxiety, it is easy to forget that you are the one who is most familiar
with this information. If anything, the defense should be another step
in the transition to your professional identity as a colleague and
psychologist.
Reality 2: Your committee is there to listen and
understand, not to test or trick you. Though it may not always feel like
it, your committee wants you to do well. It is true! They agreed to be on your
committee, haven't they (and no, they didn't have to)? They have
invested a lot of time and energy in your education as well. Professors are
very busy people and chairs are not going to waste everyone's time by setting a
date if you are not ready. If they let you set at date, they think you are
ready to present your work.
It is normal to be nervous about what they will ask:
Will I be able to answer?? It is ok to say you do not know the answer or that
you do not feel you have enough information to answer the question. In fact, it
is wiser to acknowledge when you do not know the answer rather than
demonstrating: 1) ignorance of your ignorance or, worse, 2) your ego's
inability to acknowledge your limits. When the question is hard, thank them for
the observation and ask for time to think about it. Thanking the professor
serves the dual purpose of acknowledging the professor's expertise while
psychologically keeping you in a more collegial role.
Reality 3: There will be revisions. Every defense
should result in some revisions, accept them as a matter of course so do not to
take the critiques personally. Though revisions require more work, they are
intended to improve your paper. This document will be sitting on a library
shelf with your name on it. It wouldn't be bad if it were the best draft it
could be. Whether or not the revisions seem petty or like busy work, the fact
is you need their signatures. Another skill in the graduate student's
repertoire is learning to accommodate the wishes of the committee members:
whatever makes them happy.
The extent of revisions tends to vary by chair and
program. Some chairs may only permit you to defend if it is more or less a
finished product. Others may accept the revisions as part of the defense
process. They will allow you to defend, fully expecting input from the
committee members that will lead to a fair amount of revisions. If the latter
is the case, it may be helpful to have a friend recording their input during
the defense so you can maintain focus on the discussion.
In summary, the defense should be considered a
presentation of your research and the opportunity to benefit from your
committee's input in order to improve your thesis. Give yourself credit as a
colleague-in-the-making: after the two-hour presentation, a little piece of
paper with the committee's signatures will be the most beautiful piece of paper
you have ever seen.
Here
they are, in no particular order:
1.
Stay hydrated and well fed.
I don't know about you, but whenever I have a big presentation (the defense
being probably the biggest one - only comparable to job interviews/seminars) my
nerves get the best of me and I feel like my stomach is weak, believing that I
will throw up (sorry) at the littlest change. My defense was no exception, I
was a nervous mess. My mom and PI were thoughtful enough to bring water so I
could stay hydrated and my voice would be clear. If you can, eat something, but
if not, try to keep a sugary bar or a cookie to keep up the energy once the
initial nerves have subsided. You'll thank me later.
2.
Rehearse, rehearse,
rehearse. That was always my PI's advice, in fact, our lab meetings were mostly
people rehearsing their presentations before big meetings, committee meetings,
and a thesis defense. For me, if I knew how to open up with something witty and
had an idea as to what to do for the first 5 minutes of a talk, I knew that
after that it would be smooth sailing. But it's not only important to practice
the first 5 minutes. Practice the whole thing, along with questions. Check your
timing, make sure it's right. If you can, have someone jot down any questions
you get during your practice time, regardless of how basic they seem. You'll be
surprised by the types of questions a committee harps on.
3.
Have the latest version
of your presentation available on more than one device. You'll be surprised how
many technical glitches decide to appear on your defense date, so having a USB
disk, your own laptop, a copy on the cloud, etc. can help in case you cannot
play it from the location you have it saved. You can always delete the many
copies you have after. It's better to be safe than sorry.
4.
Make sure your
presentation plays, and plays well. My department had a PC we could all upload
presentations to, but sometimes, if we didn't save things properly, movie clips
and animations would not play. Other times, it would change the format of some
slides. I had my presentation done on a PC and saved it to two *.ppt formats,
the most recent one and the previous version, in case the computer couldn't
read the new format.
5.
If you can, stop by the
seminar room where your public lecture will be and check the technical details
- Will there be problems with the projector? Will you need to bring one? Do you
need your own computer or is the one available good enough? Does your
presentation play? Are all the figures, clips and animations playing well? If
not, do you need to save them or import them to the computer? Did the
formatting get messed up? Are the fonts and contrast (colour scheme) good
enough to see from the very back of the room? Will you need a mic and pointer?
This will definitely calm your nerves a bit on D-day, and it will also help
keep your committee and audience happy.
6.
Bring copies of your
first page with you, so that once the committee approves, you can gather their
signatures and not hunt for them for the next two weeks. I think this is
standard practice now, but just in case, the graduate school, the library and
your department may (or will) want copies of your thesis. You may have
corrections to do, but the most important thing you can do is have enough
copies of your first page for the committee to sign then and there.
7.
Agree on a place to meet
with your family, friends and significant other. Don't do what Dr. 27 did. I
gave all my belongings to my family, including my cell phone, which was in
silent mode. After all was said and done, I couldn't find them. Luckily, they
had the presence of mind to stay on the same floor as my thesis defense
presentation, and they did their rounds looking for me. My boyfriend found me
down the hall. Phewww. For his defense, his mom and I didn't remember where we
would meet. Luckily we had the sound on his cell turned up and he was able to
call us and tell us where to meet.
8.
Bring comfy shoes. I
know this sounds a little unimportant, but should you wear new shoes, or heels,
you could end up quite uncomfortable at some point. Wouldn't you rather have a
trusty pair of flats to change into, instead of having a horrible grimace on
your face while shaking hands and welcoming people during your celebration?
9.
Get plenty of rest.
This seems like a lot to ask, especially when you'll be running on adrenaline
for the days (or hours) leading up to your defense. At some point the day
before, stop practicing, don't worry about whether or not you know all the
inner workings of your system... you will. And if not, it's not the end of the
world. The committee won't hate you, they know you're nervous, and that you'll
do your best. Take some time to sit back and relax, or at least calm down.
Enjoy the breeze, a warm cup of tea, a relaxing conversation with your family.
It will do you a lot of good and will energize you, reminding you that there's
life away from science and the university.
Have fun. I know, it sounds
counter-intuitive, but think of it this way, it may well be your last seminar
for a long time, this may be the last time you'll see some people in your
department, this will be the first time your family will see you talking about
your science and your effort put forth investigating over the last 4-7 years.
Stand tall, proud and confident, smile, be gracious and deliver your talk as
best as you can. Give yourself a moment to take in everything that's happening.
It's your moment, enjoy. It will go so fast, and you'll want to hold onto these
memories. You deserve it, you've worked so hard to get this far.
How to Improve your PhD
Dissertation Delivery in 10 (not so easy)
Abstract—
The dissertation delivery is one of the key points in the PhD student
career, often culminating several years of hard research. The work
conducted along four or more years is at stake in just one hour. A bad
presentation can obscure a brilliant work and convey the idea of a poor
researcher. Due to its capital relevance, the dissertation delivery
should be given full attention and consideration. However, this topic is
hardly covered if at all in any of the several textbooks on how to write
a thesis. As a consequence, most presentations are created as a
mere dumping of contents (paragraphs, equations, plots, tables,
etc.) from the written document on to the slideware, one of the
worst possible ways to communicate information and foster understanding.
Here we report 10 tips to help PhD students to prepare their
presentation, to structure its contents, to design the slides, and to
deliver it with confidence. Following these tips does not guarantee the
success in the defense day, but will certainly improve the quality of the
presentation.
Keywords—PhD dissertation
delivery, defense, oral presentation, slides
I.
INTRODUCTION
Once
a thesis document has been written, it is the time to prepare its
defense. This defense is usually carried out as a formal presentation
examined by a committee in a seminar format open to the public. The
student will probably produce a presentation slideshow using some
slideware such as PowerPoint, Keynote, Impress, or Beamer. It is
important to bear in mind that the slideshow and the presentation event
are something different from: i) reading slides, and ii) showing
summaries of the written text, figures, graphics, plots, data,
statistics found in the thesis to support a series of hypotheses and results.
While it includes all that, it is much more than that. It should be, as
any good presentation, about telling a story, the story of the
student‟s
research experience, which includes all those results and conclusions,
but also motivations, expectations, successes, failures, readings,
quests, conversations and discussions, writings, past
presentations, and even feelings. Of course, it is not possible or
desirable to tell all these things during the defense, but they should be
taken into account when planning the presentation. They can help to
establish the tone and the sequence of the slideshow. In a thesis
defense it is important to show the results and to highlight the
conclusions, but it is also important to show and demonstrate that the student
has learnt what research is, that he has followed a proper research
process, and that he can become a researcher. In fact, the results
and conclusions are already written in the dissertation and they have
been (probably) published in regular scientific peer-reviewed journals.
The defense is an oral and visual exercise that must reinforce all that
written material with a convincing communication performance of the
student‟s aptitude as a
researcher. Although the dissertation presentation has a capital
importance in the process oriented to obtaining the PhD degree, it
receives little or no attention during the education and training of
future researchers. There are many books on the topic of how to write a
thesis or dissertation, such as [1]-[8]. But they cover very
shallowly the presentation issue, if at all. However, PhD students
are usually intimidated by the defense before a thesis committee. Being
the most difficult part, it is the least covered. In this paper ten tips
or advices are offered on how to make a good presentation of the
dissertation work on the day of the defense. The rest of the paper
is organized as follows. In Sec. II, four tips are given on how to
prepare for the presentation. In Sec. III, one tip is given on how to
structure and organize the contents of the dissertation for an oral
presentation. In Sec. IV, two tips are given on how to design the
slides and include multimedia elements. In Sec. V, three tips are given
for the delivery and Question and Answer (Q&A) session. Section VI
concludes the paper.
II.
PREPARATION
Tip 1. A presentation
is not a document
One
of the biggest mistakes you can make on the day of the defense is trying
to tell everything you have done. As a consequence, you might be tempted
to dump the contents of your thesis from the LaTeX or Word document
onto a series of slides, with no other strategy than copying and pasting
into bullet points until the original document has been exhausted. Sure
enough, the end result is not a presentation, but a document in
slideware format. Unfortunately, regardless of the interest of your
research or the relevance of your results, it is impossible to tell
all about the work conducted during so many years. You have to bear in
mind two main restrictions:
1)
The time allotted for the presentation: It is recommended to never exceed
an 80% of the total time scheduled. This usually amounts to a total time
of 45 minutes, leaving a wide margin for questions and answers at
the end. Nobody will complain that your presentation was too short.
2)
The cognitive limitations of the audience: Although the members of the
committee are supposed to be experts in your topic, they might not share
your depth of knowledge on the special problem dealt with in your
thesis or on certain methods used. The language and jargon, the
specific concepts and referenced information, and even certain types of
graphics and visual aids, should be carefully chosen and explained to
ensure that the committee is able to follow you throughout the
presentation. Therefore, never try to tell everything. During this
phase of your preparation, you have to select the most relevant
information you are to present out of the mountains of information you
worked with during your thesis, bearing in mind the capacity limitations
of your audience and the time constraints.
Tip 2. Keep your thesis
and computer away initially
One
of the best things you can do during the preparation phase is to keep
away from your thesis and computer alike. Instead, use a notepad or
black/whiteboard to visualize the story of your thesis: the
decision procedure to select the topic, the beginnings, the middle
years, the ending, the different steps, people, milestones, places,
tools, expectations, hypotheses, good moments, failures, accepted and
rejected papers, and so on, that you have been through during those
years.
Write
down words and short statements that best describe your visualization
exercise and ask yourself how you would tell the story of this living
experience in a naked scenario. This exercise will help you to be aware
of your thesis as a living experience and to put into context the
slideshow you are about to produce. This will most probably add vividness
and charm to your final presentation.
Visualize
the background, the knowledge field, the previous results, the key
references, and the scientific motivation behind your work. Visualize the
main objectives, hypotheses, procedures, problems, results, and
conclusions. Write down keywords and short statements, draw
simple cartoons and plot graphics that best describe and transmit
all that you have visualized. It is not easy to do this, but it is the
only way to finally produce a vivid slideshow. Concept maps can be
of great help during this creative process [9]. Concept maps are an
effective means of representing and communicating knowledge. When
concepts and linking words are carefully chosen, these maps can be
useful tools for observing nuances of meaning, helping users to organize
their thinking, and summarizing subjects of study. With the aid of
concept maps, it is easy to better visualize fundamental concepts
and how they fit in every part of the structure of an oral
presentation. They help to include only the relevant information in
the place where it is needed, thus contributing to the overall
improvement of the presentation. Figure 1 is a concept map about concept
maps.
Tip 3. Order your
materials
You
may think that by now you are ready to produce slides, you are eager to
sit down in front of your computer and open your slideware program.
Refrain to do so. Now you must order the previous materials and complete them
with more statements, words, plots, and data. Remember, do not look
at your thesis yet, and do not look into the literature yet. This is very
important, because during the presentation and when answering questions
asked by the members of the committee you will be alone and will not
be able to consult anything. Make the effort to visualize and
arrange mentally the information. This will help you to identify your
weaknesses and loose ends, and to be aware of the many things you have to
review and read again. This will also help you to make a visual
slideshow. If you are using concept maps [9], you can reposition and refine structures.
Tip 4. Go analog
You
think that now you can go to your computer, but you still must keep on
working on paper. Produce a simple „storyboard‟ in which you
define the sequence of your presentation and slideshow. This can be as
easy as using „post-it‟s
on a table or whiteboard, as a sort of analog slideware. In each „post-it‟ you write down
one of the previous words, or a short statement, or the draft of a
plot, or the descriptor of an image, and then begin to move the
„post-it‟s to and fro in
order to establish the sequence of your presentation. The fact that
„post-it‟s can stay
for days and even weeks on the whiteboard allows you to better create the
global image of how your presentation will look like. It also helps to
decide which elements can be eliminated from the final presentation
and which are totally essential to transmit your main message.
Spend time in analog before jumping to digital.
III.
STRUCTURE
Tip 5. Structure your
presentation
According
to [10], “in a presentation, structure comprises the organization of the
major points, the transitions between those points, the depth that the
presenter achieves, and the emphasis of details”. As already
stated, a presentation is not a document. Although many aspects of the
structure of a presentation are shared by documents, they differ at least
in three aspects:
1)
Start at a depth that orients the audience. It is very positive to start
showing the big picture or global perspective about your topic to allow
the audience to understand where your work is located in relation to the
state of the art. Then you can zoom in during the central part of
your presentation, providing the details of your work, but never more
details than needed to grasp your point. Finally, in the conclusions, you
can zoom out and come back to the big picture, putting all your work in
an overall perspective, and discussing its impact on the big
picture, which by now will be fully understood.
2)
Provide a roadmap allowing the audience to know where they are at every
moment during your presentation. In your thesis document, the reader can
skim through the table of contents and different parts to have a global
idea about the general organization, where he is, and where he is
heading. During the presentation, they rely on you.
3)
Signal the transitions between the different parts of your presentation.
In the document, titles, subtitles, and paragraph groups provide a visual
cue about topic transitions and about the different parts. In a
presentation, the audience relies on you to clearly signal when a part
ends and a new one begins. Pay special attention to the beginning
and ending of your presentation. According to the Serial Position
Effects in [11], people remember best the beginning and ending of a
sequence. On the other hand, the attention of the audience decreases as
time progresses, and rises again at the end. This means that they will be
more receptive at the start and end of your presentation. These are the
two most important moments, where you must struggle to make your
point clear. When you explain your conclusions do not summarize
your research findings. Instead, explain their implications, put
them in perspective, help the committee understand their impact and what
they really mean. IV. DESIGN
Now
yes, you can go to your computer and open the slideware program. With the
„storyboard‟
in front of you, begin to do some of the slides so that you can define
the style of your slideshow in terms of font face (use traditional
sans serif), font sizes, font color, background color, and uniform
composition to arrange text, photos, plots and cartoons. Once you have
done this, you can begin the process of producing the slides following
several design rules as stated in what follows for text,
multimedia, and graphics. One guiding principle when designing your
slides should be simplicity. Each slide should illustrate a single
point and have a unique attention focus. Your slides should be
simple, conveying only relevant information, with no irrelevant data,
such as headers, footers, logos, page numbers, names, dates, clipart,
decorative elements, intrusive backgrounds, etc
Tip 6. Text elements
that everyone can read
The
best recipe for the failure of any oral presentation aided by slideware
is to ensure that the audience cannot read the text on the slides. The
main two reasons why text cannot be read are: i) the font size is too
small, and ii) the background makes the text difficult to read.
Therefore, always use a font size sufficiently large to be read from
the back of the room and ensure that text can easily be
discriminated from the background. More useful advice on the
correct use of text can be found in [12]. Bullet points are overused in
presentations. Most presentations are made up of slides full of bullet
point lists. However, nobody can make a good presentation following
this design. The more text on the screen, the more prominence and
attention it gets, and the easier for the presenter to eventually end up
reading the text on the screen. Bullet points should be used rarely and
only when other forms of conveying information have been discarded.
One of the most effective ways to eliminate them is by segmenting the
content of one overcrowded slide into two or more different slides.
Remember that one slide should contain only one idea. Slide titles
should appear on top and consist of short sentences declaring the purpose
of the slide, in one or two lines, but no more. Do not use keywords as
titles. Use instead complete, short sentences. A good title will orient
both the audience and the presenter to the content of the slide.
Tables include lists of numbers or words organized in rows and
columns. Whereas an excellent means of conveying information in a paper
or document, tables are to be avoided whenever possible in a
presentation, unless they are very simple and easy to read. Usually, a
graphic will better convey the information than a table. Equations
are also very frequent in a thesis. However, it is almost impossible for
an audience to follow complex mathematical operations and proofs on the
screen when there is no enough time for processing. Before including an
equation in the presentation, ask yourself whether it is really
necessary. If so, include one equation per slide and try to explain its
meaning. It is better to make the audience understand the importance of a
theorem although you don‟t
give the proof during the presentation, than trying to show every step
and drown the audience in detail preventing their understanding. Remember
that the complex details are given in the dissertation document. Do
not try to give them during the presentation.
Tip 7. Visual elements
that engage and enlighten
Include
animations, videos, and sound, only if relevant and possible. These
multimedia elements will amplify the effect of your talk and will let you
illustrate and describe what probably has taken you several written
paragraphs in the dissertation. This can also help to explain some
obscure points in your thesis. Never abuse animation effects and
restrain from using flashy slide transitions and text animations. Use then
sparingly and only to highlight or make a certain point, never
without a good reason. If you include videos, do not make them longer
than 30 seconds, unless they constitute a fundamental part of your
research. Again, only include videos relevant to the content you
are explaining. The same recommendations apply to audio fragments.
Finally, photos constitute another powerful multimedia element to
be included in your presentation. When appropriate and in context, high
quality pictures can be added to a slideshow. If so, use one picture per
slide and make it bleed, using all the available space. You will be
tempted to transfer graphics, plots, charts, or diagrams from the thesis
document to your slides. Do not. Instead, produce new plots and graphics,
making them afresh and new following the presentation design rules.
Remember that a slideshow is to be watched and not to be read. What is
good for a printed document is not necessarily good for an oral
presentation. Many useful advices about the design of slides can be
found in [13] and [14].
IV.
DELIVERY
Tip 8. Rehearse,
rehearse, and rehearse
Once
you have the slideshow ready, it is time to rehearse. Rehearsals are very
important, because they will help you to set up the timing, redefine the
sequence, eliminate unnecessary information, include new
information, and be aware of your oral weaknesses. A video camera
will prove to be a powerful ally, since it will help you to spot
incorrect use of verbal and body language. Do a first rehearsal
alone, and then do a rehearsal with your supervisor. After that, do as
many solitary rehearsals as you need and a final rehearsal with your
supervisor again. The number of rehearsals with your supervisor
depends on his/her availability and willingness. Invite your closest
colleagues to these rehearsals and encourage them to ask questions. This
is an essential training to be ready to answer the committee questions.
Do at least one rehearsal in the room in which the defense will
take place. Be aware of the position of the committee table, the size of
the screen, the desired illumination (remember that different slide
backgrounds require different illumination conditions: obscure
backgrounds require low illumination level in the room), the
acoustic condition, and the sound system (if you are using sound in the
presentation, test it before in the defense room). You must enter the
room unworried about technical room conditions. You must be familiar with
the room.
Tip 9. Express yourself
with your whole body and voice, not only with your words
In
addition to what you say, i.e., the verbal message, it is very important
to communicate with your voice and body language, i.e., the non-verbal
message. Here are a few advices related to the use of the voice: Speak
loudly, so that everybody can hear you. If the room is big enough, then
use a microphone.
Articulate every word of your talk. Speak clearly. Speak slowly. There
is no need to rush up. And introduce pauses frequently in your talk. They
allow you to take breath and allow the audience to digest the
meaning of your words. Make a pause after every slide, so that the
audience can assimilate the new one. And next a few considerations
about the body language are offered: The most important attitude
during a presentation is to look at the faces of the audience
individually by turn. In this case, you should look at the faces of
the committee, not focusing on just one sympathizing member, but
spending a few seconds on each. Some lecturers, due to shyness or
nervousness, do not look at the audience‟s faces.
Instead, they never take their eyes away from the screen where they
read text; or they look at the floor or at the ceiling. Establish eye
contact with the audience. Do not talk to the committee constantly,
but look at the public from time to time, talk to the audience, although
you may preferably speak to the committee. Speak standing in front
of the committee. Avoid the use of a lectern. Try to stand still, moving
only occasionally when you want to emphasize something. Move
your hands naturally. Do not put your hands in your pockets, do not cross
your arms, do not play with objects in your hands, or with your hair,
clothes, etc. When possible, avoid the use of a laser pointer. If
you need one, then it usually means that the slide is too complex.
Capitalize only the first word in a paper title, except for proper
nouns and element symbols. For papers published in translation journals,
please give the English citation first, followed by the original
foreign-language citation [8].
Tip 10. Never argue
with the committee, but discuss
During
the Q&A session, look at the committee and talk to the member that
asked the question. You must not use sarcasm, or show a condescending
attitude. And, of course, do not interrupt the person asking a question.
You may know the answer before he/she ends the question, but
refrain yourself and wait until the question/comment is completely
posed. Apart from showing respect and listening ability, you will have
more time to think and produce a better answer. It is usually said
that you are the person that knows most about your thesis, but this does
not give you the deepest insight of the topic or of the knowledge field.
It is important to show confidence and mastering. You must support
your points with logic and solid arguments, but never with arrogance. If
you do not know the answer you can always say a humble „I do not know‟. However, do
not end your turn with a negative answer, but with a positive
message of the kind „I do not know the answer to your question, but I
will search for an answer and I will be pleased to discuss it with you in
the future‟.
The more you rehearse with colleagues prior to the defense day, the
better you will perform before the committee.
V.
CONCLUSION
The
day of the thesis dissertation delivery is a key point in every
researcher‟s
early career. Most students are truly worried and feel intimidated before
the prospect of having to deliver a presentation before the committee.
This topic has been barely covered in the literature devoted to
writing a dissertation thesis. As a consequence, students have
little guidance on the topic and are doomed to commit many organization
and design errors that can be easily avoided. In a thesis
dissertation, as in any presentation, a hard work must be undertaken to
ensure an image of mastery and inspiration. This paper offered ten tips
and many advices and guidance on how to plan, structure, design,
and deliver the dissertation presentation. The aim is to connect
with the committee and with the audience since the very beginning, to
capture and retain their attention as well as to promote understanding
during the presentation, and to transmit confidence and security.
Visualization through the use of concept maps, working analog before
using slideware, simplicity in design, message amplification
through proper visual elements, and tuning the non-verbal language during
delivery are key principles behind the tips reported here. We
advocate for new presenting ways off the beaten tracks and encourage PhD
students to take the risk to do it differently by following these tips.
We are confident that they will show that they are creative, inspired
persons and both the committee and the audience will be positively
impressed.
Preparing for the Oral
Defense of the Dissertation
For many doctoral students,
the dissertation defense—the apex of doctoral study—
resides in the distant
future. But without warning, students find themselves bracing for the final hurdle. They wonder how or if they will manage to pull off this
“last hurrah” as graduate students and enter into the
scholarly realm as bona fide academics.
Students are never quite as
prepared for this event as they would like to be. This rite of
passage looms before them as
a mysterious and unknown event, a gothic terror in its own right.
It certainly should not be
this way, and some forethought and preparation will go far in fostering confidence.
The following suggestions
will help students take control of this nerve-wracking
experience and transform it
into the exciting, memorable and joyful event that it should be.
1. Attend dissertation
defenses. The best way for graduate students to
prepare for the
dissertation defense is to
regularly attend the defenses of their colleagues—those internal and external to their respective fields of expertise. They should be
doing so throughout their
programs, not just several
weeks prior to their own defense.
2. Know the rituals. What happens at a dissertation defense? Students should discuss
the intricacies of the
defense with their advisors, as there are many variations. Generally, the dissertation chair reserves a conference room or meeting room for
the defense. At some universities, dissertation defenses are
held in the graduate college or graduate school.
Attendees may or may not be
invited to sit at the same table as committee members. After the presentation, the student and the attendees are usually dismissed
from the room while the committee members deliberate. Then, the
candidate and the attendees are brought back into the room
and the candidate is congratulated and referred to by his or her new title for
the first time. At this point the committee meets privately with the advisee
to discuss revisions or other relevant matters.
3. Know the time allocated. Students should ascertain how much time their particular
departments allocate to the
complete oral defense, presentation and questioning, and should confer with their advisors. Most defenses last approximately two
hours, including deliberation time for committee members.
4. Use PowerPoint. PowerPoint presentations is a professional approach that can do
justice to the vast research
that comprises the dissertation. PowerPoint slides should
encapsulate the study and
focus on its most salient findings. In preparing, students should ask these questions: “What do I want people to know about my
dissertation? What is the most important information that I
can present and talk about?” Presenters should consider the rules of chartsmanship and create a goal-oriented presentation that
navigates attendees through a logical, point-by-point
sequence of information that builds to the conclusion in a clear and focused direction.
5. Be the authority figure. When presenting, students should think of themselves as
authorities who best
understand the information being presented and who stand in an ideal position to instruct attendees. The presentation should be
instructional or expository, so they should consider
themselves as teachers—experts in their own right—informing the audience about the research findings. This perspective reverses the power
differential and re-centers the student in a position of authority—one
who has wisdom and knowledge and who teaches the committee
the knowledge acquired.
6. Prepare slides. Prepare PowerPoint slides by using information in the
dissertation’s
first chapter (which actually
is the overview of the dissertation) as a framework or outline that reflects the logical sequencing of information. However,
substantive information in the entire dissertation should
correspond with the slides and also with the notes.
8). In essence, presenters are reducing their dissertation to a
PowerPoint format. The amount of information presented
should correspond to the time allocated for the defense presentation.
Ensure the internal and
external quality of the slides, and make certain there is integrity of information, as well as integrity in appearance of the slides.
Slides should be readable and professional-looking.
PowerPoint provides a framework for the presentation but it should not become the epicenter of the dissertation defense.
Slides should reflect the
following:
• Title of the dissertation,
including the presenter’s name, department and date.
• Department or program of
study.
• Committee acknowledgment:
Include the names of the dissertation advisor and
committee members. Presenters
should speak briefly about the contributions of each to
the success of the work. It
is appropriate to acknowledge the spouse, significant other,
family members, friends and
others who have lent support. Presenters may describe to
the attendees why they chose
their research and what informed that decision: attendees
are naturally curious about
how researchers arrived at their topics.
• Statement of the problem:
Include a brief statement that draws researchers’ attention to a particular critical situation revealed in the scholarship.
Presenters are encouraged to
incorporate several slides
that reflect statistics, data and information about the problem.
Elements of the literature
review should be included to provide a viable framework that
stands as evidence that
critical experts in a given field concur that there is merit in
conducting the research,
which fills a particular need for increased scholarship. (See
“literature review,” below.)
• Significance of the
research: Presenters should address the importance of the research
to a wide pantheon of
shareholders, from those most invested as beneficiaries to those
least. This segment of the
presentation focuses on the wider applications of the research
to the community at large.
• Research question(s): List
all of the research questions exactly as they appear in the
text of the dissertation.
• Literature review:
Presenters should provide an overview of salient critical studies. Such slides serve two functions: They delineate the current critical
perspective and they justify that the research advances
the scholarship through its research objective.
• Method: Such slides
provide an overview of the application of particular methods
through which research
questions are answered. Presenters should include references
to critical information that
addresses the rationale for the selection of a particular method and addresses issues of validity and reliability.
• Results and analysis:
Slides should reflect graphs, tables or charts that demonstrate
critical elements of the
research findings or outcomes. Presenters sometimes include
their hypotheses and the
corresponding results or analysis.
• Discussion: Presenters
should list and discuss salient findings and their applicability to
their field of expertise.
• Limitations of the study:
Generally, limitations emerge out of the research process or
after the research has
concluded and draw attention to these questions: “If I had to do
this study again, in what
way would it differ? Would another approach affect outcomes,
and if so, how?”
• Recommendations for future
study: Where do students see the logical continuation of
their work? This opens the
pathway for future scholars and extends the opportunity to
enter into the academic
conversation.
The conclusion of the
discussion, limitations and recommendations segments intersects
naturally with the
questioning phase of the dissertation defense. Presenters should anticipate the round of questions from committee members at this point.
7. Provide PowerPoint
handouts. Prepare hard copies of the presentation
for each
committee member and
attendees and distribute them before the defense—it may be useful to delegate this responsibility to a colleague (see No. 11). Send
electronic copies to committee members who will attend the
defense remotely.
8. Prepare PowerPoint notes.
A notes section appears at the bottom of each slide and
should reflect discussion
points, culled from the text of the dissertation. Notes enable presenters to remain focused and on track in an organized manner that sets up
a series of bullet points that jog the memory and help the
presenters discuss additional details or elements of interest. The opportunity to elaborate may calm nerves and help presenters rise
above the formality of the defense by dovetailing into
interesting conversational elements that heighten audience interaction.
9. Anticipate questions. Successful graduate students are generally adept at
anticipating test questions,
as their years of experience bear out. Applying these skills to the dissertation defense will also keep them in good standing.
Students should consider the academic expertise of their
respective committee members. In what areas would they most likely be focused? Advisees should be familiar with advisors’
theoretical or methodological penchants, the manner in
which they think and reason, and the emphasis placed on certain elements of the dissertation as they conferr throughout the
dissertation process. Exposure to committee members as
they serve at other defenses provides excellent insight into how they work together as a group and as individuals. Anticipation informed
by knowledge is an important tool in students’
dissertation defense tool kit
10. Conduct a dress
rehearsal. At some universities, it is
common practice to schedule
a pre-defense of the
dissertation, an opportunity to field possible questions from committee members and other faculty. Students are not provided with the
committee’s actual defense questions, but gain
experience in responding to questions that relate to their research. This preparatory experience initiates students into the defense
experience and inspires confidence.
Several days prior to the
actual defense, students should schedule a dress rehearsal in the same room reserved for the defense. Exposure to the surroundings
ahead of time engenders comfort and reduces stress. Tech-smart
rooms equipped with state-of-the-art technology make the setup for students somewhat easier. If tech-smart rooms are
not a possibility, students should set up their own computer,
projector and other equipment, such as phones, speakers or video conferencing for an offsite committee member.
11. Delegate. Students should delegate to a trusted individual some of the
smaller but
important responsibilities
of the defense well ahead of schedule. This chosen person could set up the equipment for the presentation, prepare the room on the day
of defense, and prepare and distribute handouts.
12. Consider the X factor. While there are no guarantees of technological integrity or
flawless appearances, having
Plan B as a backup is a good thing. Handouts can save the day if technology fails, and an additional fresh shirt for a spilled
coffee can be a salvation for the X factor.
13. Dress for success. The defense is a formal event in which the entire university
community is invited. The
event signals a critical rite of passage for most doctoral students and for the faculty who have supported them throughout a long and
challenging process. While there are no general rules
governing appropriate attire at most universities, the event should be regarded with dignity and respect. Presenters should dress as if
they were delivering a paper at a conference or going to a
job interview.
14. Prepare the night before.
Keep everything as normal as possible, including
sleeping and eating
patterns. Save the heavy celebratory meals and desserts for a post-defense treat.
15. Remember to laugh. Despite our best efforts and planning, we do not have
complete control. Laugh at
what does not go according to plan and move on.
16. Think about post
defense. After the defense, committee members may
decide the
dissertation requires
revision and will refrain from signing off until adjustments have been implemented. Such revisions may include minor changes to the text
that can be dealt with immediately. Other adjustments may
require elaborate restructuring, and there may be additional
work to do. Students should immediately address the committee’s concerns and implement all changes. Students need to remain focused on
graduation and complete the work that will take them
there.
17. Consider professional
editing and formatting services. The
dissertation is not
done until the monograph is
in final form according to departmental or graduate college/school specifications. At the end of this process, students, as well as
their budgets, are enervated.
However, if budgets permit,
it is advisable to secure the professional services of a formatter or editor who can put the document into final form.
The journey to the doctoral
degree is long and often arduous, but knowing how to navigate the course will certainly sustain those who venture on
the pathway to the Ph.D. The preparation of faculty and
their advisees is key to the safe harbor of degree completion and graduation.